Wednesday, May 8, 2013

Persuasion

Soren has been learning to write persuasive essays at school. He brought home the following essay in an attempt to convince Sterling to play with him more often. I love his reasons and supporting paragraphs. My favorite part: "I'll do what you want me to do (probably). I won't freak out when we stop (maybe)." My least favorite part: "I know you have to do work, but why not do it later?" Hmmm...

Overall, I think he's got a pretty good argument. Let's hope Sterling thinks so, too. :)


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